1. What new language and forms are associated with this writing assignment? (see Swales + Gee). How have you integrated these features into into your analysis? (680)
2. What is the organizational structure of your essay? (To answer this - make a brief list of the order of your points). Have you created an organization the fits the information you need to convey (or are you stuck in the bullet points of the assignment)? How can you re-arrange the order of your discussion to make a more clear presentation of your information? (682)
3. Have you provided evidence (references to your interview + the documents) to support your interpretations of the "identity toolkits," purpose, networks of communictaion, etc for your Discourse community? Are your interpretations of your Discourse community accurate (look at correlations between your evidence and your general statements)? What do you need to add? What do you need to delete?(682)
4. Do you analyze - (in addition to summarizing) - the documents/interview talk that represents your Discourse community? What do you need to add? What do you need to delete? (685)
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